Hi Lithuanians,
How are you? J
My name is Nicole and i am 14 years old, I was born in 1999 18th September, I grew up in Denmark, in a city called Kolding. I still live there. I am 1.68 centimetres, I have red/brown hair, and brown eyes, I have lots of freckles. My family is emigrants. My mom’s name is Krasina and she is from Bulgaria, My dad’s name is Mohep and, he is from Iraq. I also have 2 siblings, a little sister, her name is Olivia and a little brother his name is Kristoffer. In my spare time I play handball, Tuesday and Thursday, I really like it. I also love being with friends, going shopping, listening to music and watch movies. My favourite series is pretty little liars, and I love shopping in H&M and Gina tricot. I love being on Tumblr, Instagram, YouTube and Facebook. Our school name is Bakkeskolen, I am in 8th grade. My favourite subjects in school is English, geography and social studies. I am excited to meet you all, and spend time with you.
Love, Nicole.
Dear Nicole,
SvarSletYou have written a very good letter. You use the right vocabulary and expressions.
Your family is immigrants since you came into Denmark. Emigrants travel out of a country.
Next grammar lesson you have to focus on punctuation and congruence. Unfortunately you make some mistakes in that department.
Otherwise, the letter is very well put and you write in an interesting manor.
Thank you Thora :-)
Slet