Dear Lithuania,
How are you? My name is Louise, and I’m 15 years old. My favourite colour is pink. My
parents have been divorced since I was 1-3 years old, and I’m living with my
dad. I have a younger sister, her name is Line and she’s 9 years old. My best
friends are: Simon and Oline, they are both crazy like me. I love animals, I
have two dogs. The first, named Whisky and she is a Labrador. My second dog is named
Frida, she is a F.T Spaniel, 4 turtles and lots and fish! But my favourite
animal is a sloth, because I’m self a little bit lazy. In my spare time I spend
much time with my friends, and boyfriend! And I also spent time on Starbuks
because it’s fantastic. Also I’m a babysitter, with my friend Winnie, we are
very close friends! I also like movies pretty much, especially horror/thriller,
lots of blood and then I am happy! But I also like reading, like youth books,
horror/thriller, love and comic, and a little bit fantasy... But I’m not a
nerd! ;) My favourite season is summer, because I don’t like it when it’s cold.
I better like warm weather, ice-cream, and long days at the beach! I’m mostly
always connected to the internet, I’m kind of dependent to like: facebook,
tumblr, twitter, snapchat, instagram and all these kind of social networks,
because I like to be updated, by for example what my old class is doing, but
also what other people in the world is doing, for example on tumlbr. I’m not in
for fashion, most of all because I use all my moneys for everything else than
close :P In school, I’m really bad at
math.. But I’m pretty good at English. My favourite subject is the class time
(like a free subject)
I really look up for this project! And I also
looking forward to meeting you guys!
This is me:
Best wishes, Louise
Dear Louise
SvarSletYou wrote a very nice letter in an interesting way.
My English -techer-tooth did hurt a bit, though - Never ever say moneys with an 's.... That does not excist...
When working with grammar next time, you can focus on punctuation. You use a lot of !... don't in an English paper. You may also learn how to use comma and full stop in English.
Good job, Louise