Hi Lithuania,
How are you? My name is Kirsten Katrine Andersen Lave;
you guys can just
call me Kirsten. I’m a 14 years old girl and my birthday is September
11th. In my spare time I play
handball two times a week, I play in the middle as a play-maker. I also like to
be creative and spent time with my friends.
I’m a massive One Direction fan (my family and friends
thinks I’m crazyJ). I don’t have
a favourite; they are all gorgeous, handsome and beautiful. Please don’t judge
me :(((:))). My favourite song by them is “More Than This” and “She’s Not
Afraid”.
I have two siblings, a big sister named Sigrid and a younger brother named Sylvester.
My dad’s name is Kim and my mom’s name is Ina. We have two cats one named Perry
and one named James J
I like being
around people, and make new friends. But sometimes it’s cool just to sit alone
in my room, whit a great book or my computer. My favourite website is no doubt
Tumblr!
Right now I
don’t really have a favourite song or movie, it change all the time! My
favourite book right now is “The Perks Of Being A Wallflower”, but that only because
I just finish it.
I look forward
to meeting you guys and I think that is this is going to be a really good progress.
Love, Kirsten
Dear Kirsten,
SvarSletYou wrote a nice letter about yourself. It was personal which is good.
When you write and also when we work on grammar next time, you have to work on correcting a text. You let too many mistakes slip - and they are of a variety of kinds:
What you wrote - the right word/expression
14 years old girl - 14 year old girl
spent - spend
whit - with
it change - it changes
the last sentence is a bit messy...
But good job on the content (indhold).